Thursday, September 20, 2012

The Stick


                                      The Stick

Jake jumped off his horse and looked down the barrel of his rifle.  The posse was nowhere in sight.  He must’ve outrun ’em.  He slunk down in relief and sat on the ground, his back against the trunk of the tree.    He had just caught his breath when, through his telescope, he spied his adversaries coming over the ridge.  There were four of them, the sheriff in the lead.  Would they string him up from this very tree?  In desperation, he climbed up the tree, hiding quietly, the beat of his heart loud enough to give him away.
“Come on, Jake!  It’s time for supper.”  His brother shouted from below.
“Don’t come any closer or I’ll run you through with my sword!” Jake told him, dropping from the tree.
“You little dork, that is nothing but a stick!” The fifteen year old said with disdain.
Jake looked down at the stick in his hand. It was his trusty steed, his rifle, his telescope, his sword.  He shook his head in wondering sadness. He followed his brother out of the park, carrying his ever-changing, miraculous toy.  How sorry he felt for his brother.  It must be horrible to be fifteen!

1 comment:

  1. This story is about as sweet and tender as any I've ever read! Your observations of children are startling, and I'm envious of your special writing "touch."

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